If you’d have a knife and the murderer of your mother in front of you…. Would you kill him? Even more, if the murderer is your own father, what would you do? Would you be pleased if he went to prison? Could you forgive him?
I would have used the first person along the whole story. That would have helped to build a "story rhythm", because it sounds more like personal questions you are making to yourself. =)
I would have used the first person along the whole story. That would have helped to build a "story rhythm", because it sounds more like personal questions you are making to yourself. =)
ResponderEliminarInteresting story. Actually its really hard to decide between that questions. Perfect ending =)
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