Is this really learning?
All people say that you learn what you are interested in, I think is very depressing that the international word are not peace or international culture and all the people around the world know what is the meaning of “your fucker mother”.
The idea is great, but I think you haven´t developed it as a story. It sounds like a reflection you have made about the topic you have established. If have also found some grammar mistakes. =)
ResponderEliminarI like it, it's a reflection interesting. if you wanted to improve it, you could put another sentence for emphasize.
ResponderEliminarBut it's nice!
:)