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miércoles, 30 de noviembre de 2011

Shopping

-          Mark, we have to buy eggs, tomatoes...
-          Eat me!
-          What´s this? I hear something like a voice in a cave. Are you Mark?
Sarah went to the counter and picked up some potatoes when suddenly a banana said to her:
-          Eat me!
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6 comentarios:

  1. Javier 7 de diciembre de 2011, 10:45

    haha it´s funny. Ending is unexpected and you have put dialogues in that little space, ood work!

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  2. Alexandra de Santos13 de diciembre de 2011, 10:44

    Good idea trying to be funny! Very original using fruits with an unexpected function, that causes an unexpected reaction in the reader. And I also agree with Javi, good use of dialogues. If I were you, I would have written he/it/she instead of names. =)

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  3. Elena17 de diciembre de 2011, 6:55

    Hahaha I really enjoy with this story, very origial. I agree with my mates about the way you decided to write dialogues.
    It unexpected ending makes you reread it because, well, it´s a banana the one who is talking!

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  4. nofiction17 de diciembre de 2011, 14:58

    Original! it works very well,

    because you play with surrealism!!!

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  5. Beatriz Cánovas17 de diciembre de 2011, 15:44

    I think the same as my mates! It works because it makes me think after reading it, trying to understand the most suitable logic for the story.

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  6. alfonso lópez14 de enero de 2012, 7:43

    I find all of your stories very funny

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