He never wanted hurt me, he said me that he loved me, he didn't want hit me, he never wanted kill me...Entradas populares
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"Come on kids, You must not play or touch the things that aren't yours, You ought to ask for permission from the owner..." Re... -
Maria had always lived with her parents. She dreamed to go out home and when she was 18 years old, she said goodbye and she rent a house. ...
I agree with you when you say it´s totally and epidemic. I am not sure but I think you had to create a story based on the news you´ve read, hadn´t you?
ResponderEliminarThis is a denounce, but it´s not fiction. It´s too long and is about a problem of our Society.
ResponderEliminarClear, short and real! I think it´s perfect...there are exactly the thoughts of a girl in love....who is laying because she still love her boyfriend.....
ResponderEliminarIt´s really sad, but unfortunatly, it´s true!
I like this story becouse it´s a real problem that must stop!
ResponderEliminarThe irony that you have used mekes the story works and not olny is it reflected a real act but also make you thing about it.
ResponderEliminarI also have to say that the title is very good, when you finish reading it you realise that the title has sense.
Well done!
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ResponderEliminarthe story is good, because in few words, say says a reality!
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