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"Come on kids, You must not play or touch the things that aren't yours, You ought to ask for permission from the owner..." Re...
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Maria had always lived with her parents. She dreamed to go out home and when she was 18 years old, she said goodbye and she rent a house. ...
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I would have used the first person along the whole story. That would have helped to build a "story rhythm", because it sounds more like personal questions you are making to yourself. =)
ResponderEliminarInteresting story. Actually its really hard to decide between that questions. Perfect ending =)
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