It is a good story. It makes me smile when I read it and it is a completely true situation. As Maria has said it works very well because in 3 lines you have achieved the aim of these type of stories. Great Ana!
Amazing Ana. It´s very funny, and also as you try to play with the child innocent,it makes the story works in a better way. And also you feel identify when your mum ask you something, so it makes the reader feels confident.
haha, good story. I also like the picture you´ve decided to put. It´s a good critique to some parent´s actions many times we don´t understand.
ResponderEliminarcrude reality!!! I agree with Javi, good photo!!
ResponderEliminarYes, how many times have we seen these situation in our house?? :)
ResponderEliminarTrue story, i agree i think this situation happen in all houses.
ResponderEliminarHahahaha!! I don´t know who is the writer, but is great!
ResponderEliminarreally situation nowadays !! Good !! :)
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Funny!!! It works very well!
ResponderEliminarI like it!
We all have lived that situation at home with our mums! Good one :)
ResponderEliminarIt´s a typical dialogue with your mother.
ResponderEliminarhahahahahaha really funny :DDD
ResponderEliminarit moves me, I really like it Ana!
It is a good story. It makes me smile when I read it and it is a completely true situation. As Maria has said it works very well because in 3 lines you have achieved the aim of these type of stories. Great Ana!
ResponderEliminarAmazing Ana. It´s very funny, and also as you try to play with the child innocent,it makes the story works in a better way.
ResponderEliminarAnd also you feel identify when your mum ask you something, so it makes the reader feels confident.
Realistic and funny at the same time. Expected end, could be more shocking.
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